It seems about right. The timing could be worse than it is, which tells him it's probably going to get worse.
"You all right?" he calls, as loudly as he dares-- which isn't very-- and after a moment's hesitation and consideration, he frowns (not that there's anyone there to see it) and wriggles onward to slide down after.
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"You all right?" he calls, as loudly as he dares-- which isn't very-- and after a moment's hesitation and consideration, he frowns (not that there's anyone there to see it) and wriggles onward to slide down after.